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2011-11-16 05:49 pm (UTC)
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I really enjoyed the second-person narrative; you employed it with great skill. I loved the repetition of 'you drive, and you drive, and you drive' with 'you wait, and you wait, and you wait'. It felt very fundamental the the winchester way of life.
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